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Saturday, 8 July 2017

The Winter learning journey

For the winter learning journey activity,
I have to imagine that I will start the day by traveling 63km north up state high way 1 from Dunedin to a place called "Shag Point". I have to write a short poem about native Aotearoa to see what would happen next.
Being The First To Arrive In New Zealand (poem);

As Suspicious I was...
I quickly took my life jacket of.
I was wondering around trying to find help
but  no one seemed care so I  quickly took cover and tried to find my friends but I could find them because I was the only person there out of all of my friends.
As it started to rain I found a piece of shelter.
No one seemed to notice me.
As cold as I was lying on a piece of cardboard waiting patiently for someone to help until one of my friends finally arrived. As happy I was standing under the piece of shelter with my friends.  

Image result for friends under shelter

11 comments:

  1. Malo e Lelei Viva and welcome to the Winter Learning Journey programme. It is great to have you blogging with us this holiday!

    I am really impressed by your creativity. I think that you have captured your feelings about moving to a brand new country very well. It is a bit scary, isn't it? I can still remember the way that I felt when I moved to New Zealand for the first time back in 2010. I moved here with my family (husband and son) from Canada. In some ways it feels like a long time ago now but I still remember feeling as though I had left all of my friends behind and I wasn't sure who I was going to meet when I arrived in NZ.

    I hope that you will continue to post such great, creative blogs with us this holiday. I am already looking forward to reading them!

    Bye for now,

    Rachel :)

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    1. Thanks Rachel for commenting on my blog!

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  2. Hi Viva
    I am so happy that you joined the Winter Learning Journey. I hope you would join net year so that I can see you post most things about the Winter Learning Journey.

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  3. WOW Viva! This is very creative. Well done for taking part in the Winter Learning Journey. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your posts :)

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  4. Hi Viva
    Great job on this activity. Your poem is pretty cool and very creative. Keep up the excellent work and I hope to see more activities from you.
    Daniel

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  6. Wow Viva!
    Your description is very interesting and creative. Although this is the only Winter Learning Journey activity you have done, It is amazing and beautifully detailed! I hope to see more activities posted on your blog. Well done!

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  7. Hi Viva. I really like your poem. You have completed your task very well. Looking forward to seeing more of your Winter Learning Journey posts.

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  8. Thanks Ohsen for commenting on my winter learning journey activity

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  9. Hello Viva, I really like your poem. You have added some interesting words and that helps to hook the reader into your story. You are doing an amazing job. Keep it up.

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  10. Hi Viva,
    I think that this poem is really creative. This is really great well done.
    Eric

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